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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
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0 posted 2002-07-11 10:20 PM


I try and I try To make your life complete,
But you never seem to care or understand me,
You always walk away without a smile or a kiss,
I long to be in love with you again,
The memories I remeniss,
I see you with her,
Happier than ever,
You smile all the time and kiss her alot,
And with me, happiness was never,
It seems like I wasted my time,
Trying to make things be just right,
I just wanted to make your life happy,
I wanted to bring sunshine in your life,
Please always know,
That I loved you so much,
Even though love was something you never in return showed,
I wish things could go back to when,
And I could make us be together again,
I wish we could have been happy,
I wish we could have been free,
I wish we could have been together forever,
And lived forever happily,
But life isn't a fairy tale,
Although love can be full of fun and laughter,
But our love didn't last,
And WE didn't live happily ever after.

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2002-07-12 12:26 PM


LP1,
I am at a loss as to how to comment. This is such a personal revelation that I can't presume to "understand". I will say that it is open, honest and well written.

Godspeed
~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

LadyPeach1
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2 posted 2002-07-13 05:44 AM


I do agree with your words wranx. thank you for your reply.  LP1

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-07-13 08:36 PM


LP1,

We've all been there.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

LadyPeach1
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4 posted 2002-07-15 12:23 PM


Yes yes, I know bsquirrel!  
LP1

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