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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Just feeling a little dismal tonight....I know this doesn't have a form, but do thoughts ever? I am a fool for you The one who knows you best The one who loved you most It's me that your words slay Your eyes turn to stone Your heart kills This gaping hole you've left in my flesh doesn't bleed The salt from your hands has whitened me Your generous pain, a blanket that covers me The gel of your existence surrounds me I'm suffocated by space A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
forms often keep the best from emerging I thought this was excellent sorry about your mood keep going BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This is definitely a poem, Kris. Screw form (which you have anyway). These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
It seems the only thing people give generously these days is pain...in abundance- might I add... Hang tight Kris... big BIG hugs hun Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
i dont have form either but anyway this was a great poem. keep up the great work!  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I don't know how I'd managed to miss this great poem! loved this! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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