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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-07-03 08:03 PM


of life and death...

I teeter
upon the precipice
of knowing
and the possibility
of going
constantly aware
that there,
upon shinning
black surfaced abyss
my own reflection stares...

~Tier
8/01


{This is repost from open 15 }




"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (07-03-2002 08:06 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-07-03 09:19 PM


At first, I thought there should be a break between going, and "constantly aware" but then I thought about it, and I like the idea of "going aware" grin--but then I WOULD!!!



You are a talented poet, and I regret that I have not read you sooner...something I intend to remedy.

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 2002-07-03 09:28 PM


You've smoothed me over with this one lady!!!

What a mood we seem to be in today eh???

enjoyed this severely...that is good, yes??

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-07-03 10:42 PM


I appreciate this piece,
For I've spent much time on that precipice.


Thank God for my superior balance!

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Temptress
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Mobile, AL
4 posted 2002-07-05 01:47 AM


bumping all over the place tonight.
enjoyed this..and apologies for not being in here as often I should to support the forum more.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-07-07 02:44 AM


Great one, Tier. And I especially know that one tonight.

Mopey

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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