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Dark Poetry #3

Sorrow

jge84
Junior Member

since 2002-06-27

Posts 10
IL USA

0 posted 2002-07-03 05:34 AM

My dad is dying,
My mother hates me.
Why did God
Even create me.

Forever and ever,
I want to sleep.
Because when I'm awake,
All I do is weep.

Soon I will be
Without a father.
And when he's gone,
Life's just a bother.

My life is filled
With pain and sorrow.
So now I pray that
It will be better tomorrow.

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2002-07-03 11:00 AM

a lot of feeling here

arthur

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

2 posted 2002-07-03 03:15 PM

I feel this way ALOT! But there is alot of people that love you and care for you Josh, and I am one of them! Take care sweety.
LP1

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

3 posted 2002-07-03 03:16 PM

Oh and by the way, Thanks for posting in Dark Passions! Everyone here will love your work!
LP1

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-07-03 11:21 PM

Lots of honesty here Josh.
Embrace your sorrow, because it is important.
Celebrate your fathers' life, because that is important too

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

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