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Dark Poetry #3

Quivering lips

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2002-07-01 05:05 PM

QUIVERING LIPS

The essence of blood,
From the Incarved Picture,
I cut into myself,
It drips.
My soul is numb,
When will the feeling come?
The scars jittered,
Leaving my mouth bitter,
It drips.
No fears,
Only usless tears,
My heart skips a beat,
Leaving me sprawled underneath my bloodied feet,
It drips,
It drips,
Shaking ,
Quivering lips.

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and tortiure that goes on in the places we call,
home.
I c

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-07-01 05:31 PM

Ouch!!
That's pretty mean stuff yer a slingin' with yer pen! Unfortunately, I know all to well, the self-infliction of pain. I hope you find happiness and smiles in your days!!

K

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2002-07-01 06:32 PM

Self-inflicted wounds seem to be the slowest to heal..

I'm glad to see you in the forums...

~sending you a *smile*

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-07-01 09:08 PM

Metaphor, I hope.

Don't suffer too much for your art.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

deep_thought
Junior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 24

4 posted 2002-07-02 01:02 AM

Deep and dark. Keep em coming!

"A conclusion is simply the place where one gets tired of thinking."

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