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Some sleep and she
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Some sleep and she |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Who do I need? The wind and the rain. Some sleep and she. To lay down among tomorrow's wet roots. I'll grow again then, for some dreams. The sun is so small. Specked open eye. Lifted world stare. I don't know what to say to a girl. The warmth of in snow. The coldness let go. Understood what I know. Didn't catch the end of. Oh. Some sleep and she. All I need. Bleed and give need. Seam and reseed the sea. And your kiss can be the rocks. Your kiss can be the rocks of shore. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Nah, you know exactly what to say to a girl. Well, a grrl. Be happy.....please. Fur mich? "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sounds like you know what to say and just how to write it Mikey boy... liked the breeze of this... nifty stuff... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
"Understood what I know Did'nt catch the end of. Oh." I dont even know where to begin. WOW. Your poetry is like a weird dream where all the colors are vivid, and scenes flash by. Surreal. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Now there's a first. My poetry's a weird dream, huh? Cool! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
giving this a bump because it deserves one. enjoyed.  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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