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kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-05-21 05:31 PM

Why dont you listen
This isn't so hard
I'm tierd and lonly
I'm blistered and scarred
Thought you were my angel
Who freed me from lost
Now I'm used for pleasure
Whatever the cost
Consiquences arnt real
They just get in the way
As long as your happy
Come whatever may
Guess I'm your bitch
Your love tortured toy
Broken to pieces
Robbed of all joy

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

1 posted 2002-05-21 05:39 PM

sorry if anyone didnt like the use of the word "bitch". I wasnt meaning to offend anyone.

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

2 posted 2002-05-21 05:39 PM

That was a cool poem. Who's it about? It sucks that you were treated like that. Don't take this the wrong way but next time use spell check

.

*darkstar*

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

3 posted 2002-05-21 05:41 PM

im also sorry for my use of the word lonly.
All of you good spellers, please dont hate me.

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

4 posted 2002-05-21 05:46 PM

This is about a person on this site by the alias of "Neala". She has a boyfriend and keeps me thinking that cares about me and wants me around to be what her boyfriend cant be, dispite what it does to me.

nnie
Junior Member

since 2002-05-17

Posts 14

5 posted 2002-05-21 05:58 PM

hey thats a really good poem.love you.
-nnie

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

6 posted 2002-05-22 06:59 AM

Very well expressed here.
And yes, being used and abused isn't
the best feeling in the world.
But stand your ground and try not to
fall into that path again. Their's other fish to fry or umm is that fish in the sea?lol

:P

Dark

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-05-22 02:24 PM

Well.....I don't think I can say anything.
-Neala

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

8 posted 2002-05-22 02:33 PM

please rachel
enough hurt over this

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

9 posted 2002-05-23 09:38 AM

This was a very good poem, but what I would like to know is, How on earth did you get away with using a curse word? They have strict rules and regulations on this website that says "no cussing," so how did you pull it off? lol. When I was reading through all the poems and I saw B*tch, I thought I was just seeing stuff, then I thought I was going nuts, but ir was for real and it shocked me! But like I said, this was a good poem, and the curse words didn't effect how good this poem was. write on.
LP1

veil nulet
New Member

since 2002-05-14

Posts 4

10 posted 2002-05-23 10:14 AM

Bugger the spel check. The missspeling's are really cool. It's all about getting a voice you can call yours, whether the misspelings are intentional or not don't matter a bit.
(That's just on the formal side of things. Subject matter's your biz.)

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

11 posted 2002-06-26 01:59 AM

eh well funk her lol. good poem.
-bergundy

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

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