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kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-06-27 02:06 PM


I've failed you, I know
But never again
I murdered your son
But you won't miss him
Cause I'm so much better
The he could ever be
Your mirror reflection
You got through to me
I'll leave it behind
The friends and the loves
It all seems so pointless
And it always was
So this is goodbye
Hope you all had fun
Guess I did too
But I'm fathers son


This will be my entry, I've lost my will to write.  It is one of the things in my life that has tied me to something other then what the world would have me be.  For this reason alone, it is one of the many things I will be leaving behind as I make my final step into manhood.  Goodbye to all of you, I realy had fun.

Kinson


© Copyright 2002 Chris - All Rights Reserved
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-27 08:12 PM


What happened Chris I really didn't say that coming at all. Although your hard to predict....do I not know something?
-Neala

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-06-27 10:00 PM


Hey kinson, guess what? Men write too. Don't stop. Yr doin' good.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

nnie
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since 2002-05-17
Posts 14

3 posted 2002-06-28 05:02 PM


hey [edit] squirrel are you still talking?

[This message has been edited by Severn (06-28-2002 08:54 PM).]

deep_thought
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 24

4 posted 2002-06-29 03:43 AM


Each individual must go in the direction dictated by events. As our will shapes events, events ultimately shape our history.

Excellent piece, heightened by that write up after it.

"How You Are Does Not Matter.
What matters is How You Are in Relation to How You Are"

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-06-29 02:43 PM


Yes, nnie. It's one of things that happens when you're a living, sentient being.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
6 posted 2002-06-29 03:35 PM


stay with us
arthur

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