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Poppy Tales |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Poppy Tales Intricate depths grow among the blueness. Gardens are being planted within the souls of the ones who are stranded. But we aren't high and dry We are drowning... and sinking is even out of our reach. So, I plant my poppy and I wait for it to grow me out of here. I am intricate... I am depth... I am grown... and the blueness stays my own. ~Carman~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
armanca, interesting write of poppy dreams and people promise. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am a lover of poppies....so you got me with this one...and loved Keth's reply too (didn't you?) "poppy dreams and people promise" gawd I love this place... nice poppied reflection, luv! |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Personally, I like romping through periwinkle even though they don’t have the “nice” affect that poppies do…not that I’m saying that the poppies in this poem have a nice affect…I mean I wouldn't want you to think I didn't read this or anything by posting a non sequitur reply, because I HATE those... and uhm...well...Kenthry, WHY did you have to put that line up... I can't write anything now... *sigh* Carman, this was flawless. The transitions and originality... GOD it is SO nice to see that...I have to keep rereading, bounces new thoughts against each other every time. Wish I could write in a less bouncy state so you would know how much I love this (and maybe bounce back a bit of my understanding.. because yeah, I see the people promise, and lack thereof and... oh, this is just lovely (but in a very non-non sequitur kind of way). ~ Beth [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
This has such freshness and beauty - even in its pain - a tender and lovely combination! Lary |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
wow i really liked this,it was very gentle,but got your point across...very lovely. swamp Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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