Our last sweet sigh (another duet between Tiersdin and bsquirrel)

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-06-22 02:10 AM

She is the light that falls across my step.
he is my shield against approaching night.
She holds the moon, a flavor in her mouth.
he is the sun, forever shining bright.
She traces stars upon the dawn, my brow.
his lips are ripened fruit that nourishes my soul.
She understands the hows and whys of now.
he wraps me in his heart where I have become whole.
Her eyes are blue candy made of sweetened sky.
his skin is creamy clouds on which I am ever high.
She feeds me kisses in her stormy sighs.
he is the energy that rumbles deep within my cries...
Baby, with you I want to live and die.

My love be my oasis, my neverending thirst
I drink deeply from your best and your worst.
Entwined we capture love until we breath our last sweet sigh...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2002-06-22 02:17 AM

Such a fine poets, that bsquirrel and Tiersdin! I think they should be published like... ASAP!

*chuckles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

2 posted 2002-06-22 09:49 AM

Hmm... Awesome. Very. So much so that I'm not sure if I should compliment th' poem or start working on building up a nice ol' jealous rage.

Though considerin' the hours I've been pulling on graveyard, all I have the energy to do right now is:

Nod, smile, and murmur "ooh, pretty" at the passing colours and words in the world around me.

And no, Mikhail, I am *not* putting that into a story or poem. So there.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-06-22 01:03 PM

Hey, isn't it apparent that the "She" is you, Lori, and the "he" is Tiersdin's muse?

Well, it is!

Love y'.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-06-22 01:57 PM

That's true, Lori! If that doesn't convince you: "Her eyes are blue candy made of sweetened sky"

My eyes are brown...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

5 posted 2002-06-22 02:00 PM

Mike, y' got some 'splainin' t' do.

My eyes aren't blue! Haven't been since I was 10! Sure, there're blue hues sometimes, but dude.

Green-based, r'member? My only pride in how I look?

Feel my angsty reachiness!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-06-22 02:12 PM

Well, green as sky wouldn't have worked!

Okay ... okay ... you got me. I am a manwhore.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

7 posted 2002-06-22 02:13 PM

Not even going there. Not in public, anyway.

Feel my angsty reachiness!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-06-22 02:15 PM

A message to bsquirrel and Anvrill:

I am powerful moderator! Watch my special moderating skills! I can type things quickly!

It has come to my attention that you two are frollicking in a most undecorous manner!

Please desist immediately! This place needs to be filled with darkness, despair, drear and other things beginnin' with d! Doom! Death! All that good stuff!

You are in direct violation of my bad mood!

Grrr! I go crazy-style on you now!

*deletes post*

What th'? I'm only a figurehead!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

9 posted 2002-06-22 02:17 PM

Darkness, despair, dreary deadened dimlit doorways, and other things ending in d-words!

Drrrrrrrrrrrrum machines!!!!

Hm...

No one else gets that.

*weak smile*

Feel my angsty reachiness!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-06-24 12:59 PM

Hey cool! You killed the post.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

11 posted 2002-06-24 01:56 AM

A beautiful duet you've given us on these pages blue...
Thanx4a most splendid read PoetFriend Squirrel...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

12 posted 2002-06-24 02:20 AM

c'mon bsquirrel, you couldn't kill this post with an uzi.
VERYnice you two!!!!

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

13 posted 2002-06-25 07:06 PM

I've noticed. Sheesh, this one won't die! (and my prodding probably didn't help its tomb any)

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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