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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
they lie You are not gone. Though priests says you are . What they say is wrong, You are close ,not far. Just lift your hand to your hair And turn your head and smile And I will see you there And join you in a while arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This has a very sad feeling to it Michael. As though someone has passed away... and you don't want to believe it... I know this feeling...very well. Good write. ~Hugs to you~ |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
its hard to except sometimes, most of the times, good write |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I have often wondered what becomes of that spark that is us. Nice. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
arthur, I like the poem, and way it makes for thoughtful replies. Thanks for sharin'! She said burn ... together. |
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