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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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All those around me See what I have become But you You think I am nothing Short of a hopeless cause I have falling threw the cracks You brought me to this Your not who I thought you were Cause your still not here Nor will you ever be You have to take me into consideration Before you come to terms With anything realting me But that is just a piece Of who you are Although I can't see being That heartless to let 17 years Slip away that could have shown something Although I suppose that is Part of your daily cruelty treatment plan For this world It only would have takin One quick movement For you to take me into Your mind and realize I am here too But once I come back down to earth And realize that you never will Cause that just isn't who You ever want to be -Neala [This message has been edited by Neala (06-15-2002 03:13 PM).] |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
I really like this one is treaatment Plain or Plan Can't wait to read more |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Alrighty Matt... |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
Im sorry I read it wrong I do like it though |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 So angsty! Y' definitely belong in Dark. So ah'm glad y' posted here.She said burn ... together. |
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