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The Endless Desire
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The Endless Desire |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
The Endless Desire by, Matt Dedicated to my only love, Cassie My arms wish for one last embrace My eyes long to see your face To see your smile, and tearless eyes To never have to say goodbye My knew shakes for love so true My heart beats just for you My tears fall amongst the ground Every time you're not around My heart rips in two and four Love has finally closed the door And locked me in this dreaded place Miles away from your enchanting face Your eyes, your smile, your hands, and hair I love everything about you, it's not fair To lose you in a moments time To fall silent like a mime My heart's full of love and pain My tears fall down like acid rain Melting my heart and poisoning my soul As once again love takes its toll You're all I want in this life Hold my hand and end this strife Speak to me and melt my doubt And "I love you", I will shout I love you and only you My heart knows this is true But when I see you day by day I forget all I wish to say Emotionless my life is now Begging to see you again somehow Hoping our lives will cross again But what then Will I confess my love to you And hope you know it's true Or will I let you go And wait till deaths final blow I wrote this to tell Cassie that I love her, and hopefully to date her again.I haven't given it to her yet, I'm still waiting for the perfect moment. Let me know what you think |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
Personally i really liked it. I do think its a little obsessive but I've written some pretty obsessive things too. I think you should give it to her if you want her to know how you really feel, but if you want to maker her fall right back into your arms, I think that your gonna have to give her something more than a poem (i dont mean material). |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
by the way, what state do you live in, i think i know you |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
wow, weird. I live in Indiana. |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
I meant weird that you might know me. I didn't think anyone that lives here would find this place. I didn't really think that too many people like poetry here  also, for your other point, I agree, but I know not what to do. I never felt this way before. Everyday I get up for one reason, because I might see her that day. There is nothing I wouldn't do for her. I would die for her if it came down to it. I can't stand that I can't tell her this, for fear of losing the friendship we have. ugg... The story as old as time. anyhow, out of curiosity, am I who you beieved me to be? |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
no, i guess i dont know you, but your poetry reminds me of someone with the same name, and the girls name is the same, freaky |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
odd. Same situation? They say everyone has thier double, but that's just...odd |
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