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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
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Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2002-05-21 05:47 PM


Anger and Resentment

why do you hate me
what did I do
gave everything up
all for you
then spitting in my face
you turn away
you never follow
what you say
you claim that you love me
but how would I know
you're never around
you tell me to go
you leave me so angry
feelings welling up
wanting to cry
making me corrupt
screaming and kicking
all in my head
wishing for me or you
to be dead
these feelings aren't normal
they don't feel right
they make me alarmed
I can't sleep at night
whenever it's like this
can't see past the red
waiting for the recourse
for the wrong things I've said
then when it fades
apologize for how I was
but it starts up again
because it just always does...



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kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
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1 posted 2002-05-21 06:35 PM


i know just how you feel, unfortunatley
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2 posted 2002-05-22 08:05 AM


Love shouldn't hurt!  You have shown what a bad relationship definitely would be like, as love never hurts. Well done poem.

  

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powerofthysword
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA
3 posted 2002-05-23 10:21 PM


Another excellent writing from you, I really
like your style.

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

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