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The Circle |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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THE CIRCLE Into facts and figures seekers look for truth and contemplate and calculate long into the night but firmly held and trapped in the circle of our youth we remain forever blind to the proof we hope to find. The circle moves, it always moves, and goes with the flow attuned to the music like a dancer on the stage and keeping time with time it pays homage to our souls by creating the reality we call forth every day. The mass of human flesh still innocent in youth place all their energy, the blood of their life force, into the shallow grave of worldly evil ways that keeps the circle moving away from our true source. I want to burst the bubble; I want to grow my mind, and step into adulthood beyond this present time but I know it’s only love, our essence long forgot, that sets us on the path to the truth we hope to find. But back again, back again, the circle moves again into another time, another youthful mind, and another try at living until we live the truth together as we were before our human lives. No time, no time, to love this time - I must live a lie with all the tears I cry unfelt by humankind! |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
good imagery, but i have issues with the rhyme scheme - is there one? or is it just chance that some parts rhyme? other than that (admittedly mild) issue i like this. -Dave |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I guess I broke the "rules" again but thanks so much for reading and commenting. |
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