The rabitt who lost her spectacles

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Dark Poetry #3

The rabitt who lost her spectacles

Swamp¤Faeryie
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

0 posted 2001-01-11 11:28 PM

I will not shrink for the demons,
for they will not shrink for me.
I won't let anyone else hurt me.
promise me only i will hurt myself.
No one else.

Dreams come together when i listen to music,
music came together in my dreams.
I sing how i want to.
no one else wishes for a song.
No one else.

I smash my head against the rocking chair,
and the chair rocks when i fall.
What was i doing on the floor?
i guess i wanted to cry,but no one else knows.
No one else.

Blood drops against my spectacles,
my spectacles collect the blood like a bowl.
Pour the bowl into the wash can,no one will notice.
'cause it all comes out in the wash.
No one else.

The dark side of the moon has a cradle for me,
my bed is on the dark side.
I don't sleep their.
i just sit with no one else.
No one else.

"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2001-01-12 01:20 PM

Very different but it had a rather good theme to it. Good work

Mags

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2001-01-12 06:52 PM

Very good. This one has some rather dreamy surrealistic images. I like it quite a lot. It's a very good portrayal of what goes on inside the mind, where no one else can see.

Swamp¤Faeryie
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

3 posted 2001-01-13 08:28 PM

thanks everyone!! =]

"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

howpeculiar
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since 2000-12-12

Posts 56

4 posted 2001-01-14 10:01 PM

~I will not shrink for the demons,
for they will not shrink for me.~

I love this line!

I can't decide if this is a tribute to courage, or a fit of loneliness. Both, Perhaps?
Enjoyed very much…
Be Well.

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

5 posted 2001-01-15 03:45 PM

thank you for your comment howpeculiar. That's prob'ly my favorite line too,and it is,what you could call "a tribute to courage" =] thanks again...

sam

"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

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