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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2002-03-20 11:33 PM


The crystal sheen
Of an amber drop of dew
Which falls from my hand
Radiates the majesty of love
Beholden to none other than you
My sweet defeat

G. A. Webb
02/26/02


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (03-21-2002 12:29 AM).]

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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2002-03-21 09:28 AM


Very nicely written, my Friend.
Defeat .... a well known feeling

Mags

btw, I lost your email address

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

CrEaTuRe
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since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
2 posted 2002-03-21 03:47 PM


Nice piece ... short yet meaning ...

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
3 posted 2002-03-26 01:56 PM



hi greg ...

the poetry is still as good ...
Nice.


G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
4 posted 2002-04-02 11:28 AM


Thanks everyone. This was just a little something that popped in my head one night, so I thought I'd write it down. Thanks again!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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