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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-03-14 02:55 PM


I like to lift you up and push you down,
gradually suck you in this whirlpool.

Gradually eat up your muscle
of your leg of your brain.

So it can run no more!

I would like to slow you down,
and there's nothing you can do
to get ride of me.
You've invited me to stay.

It's not luck, that brings me in;
it's what you've done everyday.
You want to be down on your knees,
and I'm shouting for you
to Jump off the cliff.

Jump off the cliff!
Don't you want,
to taste what's like to be sucked in.

Jump off the cliff!
Remember,
you're cool, or
is it just your face?

Did I hear, that you say,
A little bit don't hurt.
It's just a simple trap,
I can't believe you fall for it.

Down to the ground,
where you belong.
Your time is up.

And who is your friend?
(Those who runs and flies away)

Broken heart,
remorse,
but they has come too late.

Too late to
save your life...
Your name go down to history.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-15 09:49 AM


girl, this is awesome....I fell off that cliff a long time ago but I also climbed back up and walked away!! It can be done and hopefully in time your friend will realize what a waste of "self" it is to do that junk.....(((hugs))) great writing!!
aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2002-03-15 12:50 PM


glad you're here! Ya, I hope he won't do anything silly. Keep him in your prayer please.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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3 posted 2002-03-16 12:49 PM


Good poem to your friend and I hope he can make it as anything synthetic is only temporary, and the real joy and happiness comes from anthing but!  I guess all you can do is support him to get off it.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
  ~* Albert Einstein *~

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