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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2002-02-12 08:10 PM


I need no validations,
I love all that I am,
I need never stand over any soul,
To feel more superior than I am.

You on the other hand,
Struggle to authenticate yourself,
To prove you have a worthwhile existance,
And show your manly wealth.

There is no cost equivalent,
No values, no rights for me and mine,
Start the search within I beg you,
And you could be surprised by what you find.

Your very ethics and values,
Have been warped with time,
And it's not my fault,
For I was not the one who committed the crime.

You feel unimportant?
Left behind, unable to shine?
Do not punish me for that,
Find a way, push forward this time.

For the proof is in front of you,
I can no longer bear the brunt,
Of your feelings of inadequacy,
And the lies with which you strut.

I shine, and I know my gifts,
My world radiant with love and stars that shine,
Never again will you make me doubt myself,
Never again will your jealousies rule sublime.

There is no need for validations,
And do not forget I remember who you are.....

*~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~*

© Copyright 2002 Isis - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2002-02-13 05:37 AM


I enjoyed this Isis, especially the way you ended it!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
2 posted 2002-02-18 10:41 PM


and remember it well, my friend! So glad to read this one, and to see you stand up for what is right within that soul of yours!
Touche'!

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2002-02-19 04:11 PM


I think that this would be the answer to the previous poem. . .

well done my friend. . .
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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
4 posted 2002-02-23 02:06 AM


I think I know this person you speak of...geesh..or someone like him..
I enjoyed this.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

marya2
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 36

5 posted 2002-02-23 11:57 AM


bravo and kudos and all that, good for you woman, this is a testamoney (spell) to your spirit., you are a goddess in your own right.
i love this piece, to pieces

marya

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2002-02-23 03:49 PM


Hello Isis

Through your words I heard a woman who had gained strength from past hurt and was not going to be hurt again by anyone.  So much power and meaning was felt through your words and I wish you well.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142

7 posted 2002-02-24 02:58 AM


not knowing is ignorance, not feeling is lost. courage cannot ever be measured even per situation. love is dependant right ? it depends upon mutual respeect, admiration, and understanding. through you, i can see why I was left behind. I thank you and hope, and only hope, that I am not left or leave any behind again.
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