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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-01-26 11:15 PM


This may sound Rude, but if you were only there....*giggles*

Tonight was an experience, I must Tell you all, Typical case of Guy "Trying" to Meeting girl
Standing at the bar, full drink in My hand, I felt his approach i was A Target of prey
He asked me if he Could by me a drink, I looked at Him, Nodded "No thanks i just did"
He asked me to dance, I then rolled my eyes
"Please go away" Not interested So Don't try
He snickered and laughed, then Turned to my friend
Hey beautiful Do you wanna Dance?
She giggled then said
"Sure why not"
I'll meet you out there, go find us
A spot
Ask the D.J for some Reggie, let's Make it hot
Sipping my drink, trying not to
Laugh
Thinking to myself this poor guy
Won't last
He kissed her hand then turned to Me
"You should have took me up on my Offer"
You don't know what you are missing!
An uncontrolable laugh escaped from My lips
I watched him walk away
What a Sucker he is  
We quickly finished our drinks and
Headed for the door
Laughing and Snickering
As We saw him on the floor  



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

© Copyright 2001 Danyel L. Azar - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-01-26 11:56 PM


Temptress*Moon,
naughty, naughty, leading that poor innocent man on and then leaving him on the dance floor where he could have gotten eaten alive.
ROFL.
And I guess it wasn't like this
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-01-27 02:18 PM


Nice job on this one....but that was mean hahaha.....



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Baby G
Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39
Australia
3 posted 2001-01-29 04:27 AM


I luv your poem, it had wit yet it was very real!  More women need to crush egos of guys like that! hehe
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2001-01-30 11:58 AM


Very cute!

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
5 posted 2001-01-30 12:59 PM


oh well this was just too cute for words *lol*
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