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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
i look to love daily i love to be daily so many want more so few understand that we live in this land distant thunders do not awake familliar thunders, kids at stake i learn to live daily i hunger for love daily so many want war and won't take a stand so we might live in a land familliar spears overtake distant realms at stake i look to love daily maybe we love to be so few are familliar with what most don't understand we even fewer know it to be love for one for you for all for"to do" for just one single second for a smile for all within for us again for laughter for a look in the eyes for a chance just to realise for love what's wrong with that J.L. Koehler [This message has been edited by carolinadreams (01-16-2002 01:17 AM).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
interesting poem. If everyone could really love... Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I truly liked this piece. It was written in a very abstract way and yet not too strange to confuse the reader. I wish we could all love daily. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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