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eve_winters
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0 posted 2002-01-04 10:30 AM


what am i doing?
this isn't what i want
time in flight
just past my fingertips
ruining everything they come in contact with
tidal wave of destruction behind me
taking the wrong path with every step
losing myself in the maze
blissfully non-attentive and deleriously self- assured
is where i want to be
taking the wrong steps with a dopey smile on my face and a melody in my heart
finding bliss any old where
i only want to run from here
and suffer life gladly

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1 posted 2002-01-06 08:06 PM


Very interesting poem...nicely written!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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