Dark Poetry #3 |
You made me weak |
Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
The only thing I can seem to write about is you I'm getting kind of tired of being depressed all the time During the summer you were the source of all my joy Now it seems you are the source of all my pain I don't think that you're capable of love You have no heart at all If you ever had to go though what I have I'm sure that you would break I used to be such a strong person But you have made me weak Blessed Be Those Who |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I found that the strength comes from letting go and moving on...accepting that your happiness will come from within yourself...not by counting on someone else's presence...James |
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*STINA* New Member
since 2001-02-24
Posts 5Michigan |
Very nice. I'm going through something just like that right now--stay strong. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Maybe finding another source of joy is in order. Thank you for sharing this with us, and I hope the pain subsides soon. *hugs* Hang in there. --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
... During the summer you were the source of all my joy Now it seems you are the source of all my pain ... Very nice. I loved (the poem). Be strong |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Nice subject. I disagree with the last line though. But that's my thoughts of life. I believe you allow yourself to be weak, not other's. It is very easily done though, I know .... cause .... I have been there with my ex husband. Mags |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Danielle, This is a fantastic write. I know someone just like this. He was gone from my life and I was stromg, now he's back sort of and I am weak again. |
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