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Danielle
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Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2001-12-14 06:24 PM


The only thing I can seem to write about is you
I'm getting kind of tired of being depressed all the time
During the summer you were the source of all my joy
Now it seems you are the source of all my pain
I don't think that you're capable of love
You have no heart at all
If you ever had to go though what I have I'm sure that you would break
I used to be such a strong person
But you have made me weak

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-12-14 10:15 PM


I found that the strength comes from letting go and moving on...accepting that your happiness will come from within yourself...not by counting on someone else's presence...James
*STINA*
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2 posted 2001-12-14 11:53 PM


Very nice.  I'm going through something just like that right now--stay strong.
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3 posted 2001-12-27 01:03 PM


Maybe finding another source of joy is in order.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and I hope the pain subsides soon. *hugs* Hang in there.

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

allis4angel
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4 posted 2001-12-27 06:42 PM


...
During the summer you were the source of all my joy
Now it seems you are the source of all my pain
...

Very nice.

I loved (the poem).
Be strong

Dark Kisses
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5 posted 2001-12-29 10:24 PM


Nice subject.  I disagree with the last line though.  But that's my thoughts of life.  I believe you allow yourself to be weak, not other's.  It is very easily done though, I know .... cause .... I have been there with my ex husband.  

Mags

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6 posted 2001-12-30 11:39 AM


Danielle,

This is a fantastic write. I know someone just like this. He was gone from my life and I was stromg, now he's back sort of and I am weak again.

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