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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
i'm not sure that i am ok and i'm gettin real sick of looking baack we are all beautiful, right i give all my works without these damn spaces and without these damn continnnuatioon keys to the one woman that sang and gaave a (edited by a moderator) drinking i'm not allowed to perfect sober i'mm not engulfed yet i can only wriiite see the spaacee see the nnnnn i am not sure i am alright i thank you for being with me tonnight J..L.Koehler I do see aa flight witot bounds i need not, and LOVE [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh..... you are alright!! you are more than alright! you are YOU, filled with light questioning the whys no sorrow should be felt within a spirit so sincere who tries too hard i recognize myself in this, for i am also scarred ......... thank you for posting this.. it hit me heavy... so clear to me the words reveal pain.... you are not alone....i respect writers who can write from their heart like this.... !! more than i can tell you.... |
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