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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-01-25 09:36 PM




Confusion Spirals around
Me
Not knowing what to do
True love stands before
Me
And i turn my back on you
Not knowing why, i do the
Things i do
Deep down, I'm frightened of
Losing you

But still as time goes by
I push you away
Hurting myself and you
Like always
I don't want you gone
I love you to pieces
But i need to know
That I'm the one you
Want to be with
I'm the type of person
Who needs to be shown
That you will hold me tight
Never letting go

I still never recovered from
The past love before
Giving my all, with nothing
In return
I worked so hard to finally
Get you back
Confessing my love
And admitting all my wrongs

I'm miserable without
You
Can't you see?
Look past this hardend wall the he made me build  
Please
Stop with the hurtful comments
And show me that you care
Im capable of showing you more then my Fair share

"Drama Queen" is what you think of me
But understand
I really never learned
What love really was
So i fight for the attention
To get a response
It's the only way i know how
To capture the loveing feeling
From someone else  

Hoping this get's through
And you remember my past
Understanding what ive been
Through
And what has become of me now  

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I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -E
-ESH-


[This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 01-26-2001).]

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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2001-01-26 11:49 AM


This hit me so close to home here! You expressed this so well.  And YES I know how you feel! It is so difficult to feel love after being scorned so badly.  

Good luck to you,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2001-01-26 07:31 PM


Yes--I know all too well about this too--great work   & good luck

LOVE ELMO <3

armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-01-29 02:09 PM


Sometimes  act out... People who really knew me.. tell me i want drama.  I suppose in my defense.. i'd say that i want to make sure this person sticks with me thru thick and thin.


armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
4 posted 2001-01-29 02:09 PM


Sometimes  act out... People who really knew me.. tell me i want drama.  I suppose in my defense.. i'd say that i want to make sure this person sticks with me thru thick and thin.


firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
5 posted 2001-01-29 05:45 PM


Well, sometimes we all need to take a step back, access a deep breath, bury our pride and just let what be, be.  Sometimes we try too hard and never get ahead, then there are sometimes we think that we are better off dead.

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2001-02-08 05:34 PM


Interesting...James
Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

7 posted 2001-02-08 07:39 PM


WOW!! From one Drama Queen to another...GREAT POST! (that is what my ex used to call me all the time..)  I really do understand this poem.

bethann

"I mean that loving you is strange and adored by me throughout..oh no it's you again, blessing you with every kiss..."


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