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Passions Void |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Passions Void Body arches, racked with pain As passions power the course The violent spasms of loves Lost chance, ever erupting Overwhelming senses Passions void fills With emptiness Once more Alone! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, very powerful write my friend. Dee |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I agree, very powerful. I know how this one feels, my friend. Not much fun at all. (((((HUGS))))) to you. All writing comes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ouch! can feel that pain... hugs..g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
The format was awesome, short and sweet, nicely done  yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Rather supprised to see this one back up again.Though I honestly thought I had responded to this way back. Ah well, thanks anyway, you all take care!! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
awesome poem, Love does strange things, sometimes the void is filled with so many feelings that we would rather it stay empty of the passion that we so oft get caught up in. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One you may have posted this a long time ago, but I missed it! Loneliness to the bottom of your soul. Hope that pain is gone for ever more, ME |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Rosebud1229 ~ yes indeed, thanks! M E ~ mostly gone, though there are still the odd moments! |
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