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fractal007
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0 posted 2001-11-09 03:50 AM


When slowly you walk
And quickly you mock
And all seems old
And cares lie in mould,
When your skull
And your brain
Try to dance
In Reason again
When in a trance
You lie in vain
And still they believe
And still you can't leave
The presence of fear
That she won't
Always be near
When you don't
Know the future's events
From the past's foul dents
Then that's when you'll know for sure that I am here.
That's when you'll know for sure that I am here
To embrace you and call you my own.
That's when you'll whisper to me in your bed
And call and scream my name.

Now do you really want someone taking me away from you?...?

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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1 posted 2001-11-10 11:57 AM


"When your skull
And your brain
Try to dance
In Reason again
When in a trance
You lie in vain
And still they believe
And still you can't leave"

wow.....I like that part.
very cool  

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since 2001-07-22
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2 posted 2001-11-10 02:15 PM


Well this certainly was worth reading.

Enjoyed,
James

Good cannot exist without evil.  Darkness I embrace.

fractal007
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3 posted 2001-11-10 08:59 PM


Thanks for the responses all.  I'm glad u liked it.  Seems this kinda terse and slightly metrical[I think that's the right word for poetry with meter..] is working well.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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