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Pool of Mud |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). 
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Weeping freely to cast out parculiar deamons within me. Dancing on empty grave as my road to hell I pave. Spining liquid spiral leading to empty rotting soul playing in my private pool of mud. "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
What sorrow... I can feel that pain, expressed in the words.... Are you feeling all right? This is a change from your other poems.... Still well written, but the sadness is overbearing.... |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Baroni, I am fine dear, thank you for the concern. At times my poems seem to take on a life and emotion of their own, thats all. Like this one, I started with the simple phrase "pool of mud" in my head and, well, you read the outcome....lol, twisted I think I am, yes! **smiles** Once again, thanks, your concern is much appriciated. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow, I can almost smell these vivid images--Great work!!  LOVE ELMO |
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Immortal Beloved Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42the carpathians |
poetess ali, once again i truely enjoy your work,the more i read,the more i love it,i beleive you must go to my library,thank you for the excellent reading!! lida Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Glad to hear you're feeling fine... Stop scaring me like that!  |
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