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Baroni
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since 2001-10-14
Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-10-26 09:17 PM


Out of the darkness, it comes.
Can you hear it?
Faster and faster it runs.
Do you fear it?

Strange and confusing to find.
All is not lost.
A savage attack on the mind.
At what cost?

Images of gear, all created
By my thoughts.
Because of your absence, frustrated,
I am caught

And held fast by your image,
at dawn.
Because of your visage,
Now gone.

The start of a waking dream.
Why leave me?
I am lost, without a scene,
Do you percieve me?

Simply put, I miss you.
Come back to me.
Once more, let me kiss you.
Come back to me.

For My Lady Fey -- hurry back....

© Copyright 2001 John Barron - All Rights Reserved
Snowdwen
Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana
1 posted 2001-10-26 09:46 PM


Baroni,
Nice read!
Sometimes being apart can hurt,
but perhaps she'll find her way back.
If luck runs her way you'll be there with open arms.
Good luck!
Snowie  

"You live you learn and life moves on"



alibaster
Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).
2 posted 2001-10-27 10:40 AM


Simply beautiful and so soul felt.
Until...ali {alibaster}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

Poetof-the-night
Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 13

3 posted 2001-10-28 02:24 PM


Nice poem Baroni, reminds me of my current situation with a certain girl...
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