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Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-10-09 12:13 PM

A lonely man
standing wearily
Defeat in his eyes
Losing his lowly war
Voices from within
Echoing harsh words
At first like a whisper
Then slowly growing
Louder and louder
Until not one thought
Can be heard over the roar
Of Laughter so cold
"Why would she have you?
How could she ever love
Such a pathetic being"
Falling to his knees
Realizing the truth inside
that no person in this world
could ever begin to love
such a lowly creature
hands covering his face
as he weeps silent tears
wishing for comfort
someone who could help him
take away the pain inside
but he knows he is alone
all that surrounds him
is the lonely darkness
as the night falls
all that can be heard
are cries of heartache
wishing for an angel
the angel of death
to please release him
of the pain and sorrow
bring him home
but no answer can be heard
maybe one day
he will find peace
one day soon

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-10 09:39 AM

goodnees, this is so sad.....you go right to the heart.....hugs to you

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

2 posted 2001-10-10 10:30 AM

Wow well first off I must say that I really liked it a lot it was good and intense and such. Good stuff.

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

3 posted 2001-10-10 11:26 AM

Wow...this is me, to a tee. I feel every word of this, every day of my life. Very well done. I wish you the best my friend, for I know this pain all too well.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

4 posted 2001-10-10 11:41 AM

Very touching, and sad. Everyone is loved by someone, but we don't always see it that way.

Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

5 posted 2001-10-10 11:04 PM

I can relate to the feelings here too. Good job.

JT

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