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Alan
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0 posted 2001-09-27 10:04 PM



Going Home

As I close my life's door
And turn off the light
Watching helplessly as my dreams soar
Off into the darkness of oblivion

My heart turns cold
My mind goes to purgatory
This day quickly grows old
As the sun runs quickly to hide its face

The last memory I have is one of goodbye
For since you said goodbye silence has blossom
But this time I shall not give chase nor shall I cry
I shall just walk away into the far end of this day

My mind is deadened with pain
As my soul has turned black
In my future there is nothing to gain
So I will just quietly walk away

As I head for my home
In the icy lands of the north
I shall live my life under the whispering dome
Of my castle of ice, my fortress of solitude

© alan

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2001-09-27 11:02 PM


Heartfelt emotion written here.

My heart turns cold
My mind goes to purgatory

I've spent a lot of time there myself lately. (or is it Limbo? No, can't be, the Catholic church did away with limbo!!)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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2 posted 2001-09-27 11:24 PM


Tracey...thanks...they may have done away with the word...but not the state of being..
Dee
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3 posted 2001-09-28 12:31 PM


For since you said goodbye silence has blossom

Hmmm...know this feeling   Sad write once more Alan.

Dee

Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-28 12:39 PM


Dee..I hope your sadness is behind you...thanks for reading this
alan

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5 posted 2001-09-28 12:15 PM


Alan, this feels so alone, and sad. I'm sorry you are sad.   hugs to you  
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