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lost in space |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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(a composting) regeneration lost in space? all of this in fingernail clipped and flying through the air.. On the floor a "planet" lands-- perfection of biology-- (and pretty good trajectory) I thought it was piece of ME. I wonder if 'they' understand. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
A very interesting read. I like it alan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
amazing what comes to mind when giving yourself a manicure (I assume that's what you were doing when your nail flew through the air). I had to read this a couple of times to understand (but then I've had a glass or two of wine now!!) Enjoyed it Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Some say K that all life began on Mars...so perhaps there are two planets on the floor? Heh... I like this...nice rhythm etc...short but effective - perhaps with a possibility to be confused due to an excess of brackets, italics and hyphens...but that is only me speaking critically...(as you require hahaha) how you doing anyway? Hugs  K |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
K--hEY...i'M OKAY...MY TYPing sucks...but why break a trend...and was an outline of something, anyway, a thought that intrigued me that I wanted to lay down...and sometimes the replies help me grow toward what I strive for... thanks to all...  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
your typing sucks??? Haha...I often push caps lock when I go gamely for an a with my little finger hehehehehehe... CAPS LOCK RULES good to hear your well...and replies educate us I know.. K |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Life and Death ( a responding) degradation worn from space Lost anyplace any time, any where, wearing any face all this from a thought flying through the air chipped away winding away when sought wandering away no care, ripping away and from these chips are brought where imaginations dare, slipping away. (can you feel the karma flow) too soon fear lets you know degradation is so. As the thought is released to wear, New ones spring out and are there. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
PG? Yer beautiful!  I thank you so much...ironically, you always seem to find hope between my lines...I do thank you. |
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