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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-01-21 12:56 PM




ALONE
Beaten in a Dark room
Tucked away
Mindless and Bruised
Walls closing in
Crushing his delicate soul
Leaving him with nothing
More,
Then Taintied Visions
Of a Love he fought for
All this for Love
This Misery he wears
Leaving battle marks
Open and Sore
His Heart Bleeds,
Washing away pain
Slipping life from him
Leaving him for dealth to come,
Nothing more then a capsule for life
Now Drained from a lovers touch
No longer believing in Angels
He curls up to the floor
Craddling,
Crying to himself
I can't take this anymore!
A once Romatic Soft soul
Has been Hardened to the core
All this For a love
He thought true,
If he only Knew then,
The Angel that he saw
Was nothing more then the Devil
Masking an Image of a Beautiful
Angels Smile
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I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-



[This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 01-21-2001).]

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-01-21 07:43 PM


Deep stuff here.
They may have the look of an angel but sometimes the have the hidden soul of a demon.
All too true I'm afraid..
Well done!
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2001-01-21 11:17 PM


wow!  very well written..i really enjoyed this read...  

hugs, g


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to where we would think so..."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-01-26 04:11 AM


We want to believe in angels so much that we can be deceived...James
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