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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-08-08 11:55 AM


I supose you know you helped me,
when I was crying to you on the phone,
but now I get the impression that you didn't care,
and I have a few things that I need to clear up.

Did you lie to me when you told me it wasn't my fault,
I wasn't the one resposible for Jesica's death,
when you told me not to cry,
because it wouldn't make anything better.

Did you lie to me when you told me I was the one,
the one that you cared about,
who you always dreamed about,
did you think it would make me stay?

I suppose there's a reason,
why you say you don't care anymore,
why I say I don't care anymore,
but part of me still does.

Did you know that the reason is because of you,
you're why I don't care about you anymore,
you're not the person that I fell in love with,
but I'll always love you with some piece of my heart.

Did you know that I'll always be there,
on the other line of the phone,
if you ever have any problems you need to share,
you can always tell me.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
allis4angel
Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal
1 posted 2001-08-08 06:14 PM


Why did I cry reading it?
I don't know why.

Well done.



Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
2 posted 2001-08-08 09:51 PM


This is sadly beautiful. Well done.
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
3 posted 2001-08-09 11:45 AM


Simply beautiful

Mags

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!

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