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allis4angel
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal

0 posted 2001-08-03 05:33 PM



I’m learning so much
About words
I never thought about

Now I know what “all” means
When I use it to say
I think about you all the time

“Wish” has a new meaning
When I try to understand
The strange needs I do have now

Hard to accept about “fail”
I do know now the pain it brings
Every time I look to us

What best “dream” can mean
I know very well nowadays
So many times I lost myself there

The “woman” you are is enough
Whatever I could be searching
About the perfect one can be

“Angel” is not what I thought it was
Before heard your voice
Or watch your way to be

About “love” I found the worst
In this forbidden game
You force me to play

I’m learning so much
About words
In the lessons your silence gives me



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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2001-08-03 05:38 PM


Very well written
  
Words do have different
meanings to different
people.
Nicely expressed here

Mags

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!

Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
2 posted 2001-08-05 03:15 AM


Very nice analogy, using your previous understanding of words compared to your new ones. Nicely writen.  


~Jess

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-08-06 03:33 PM


Yes I know that word silence...James
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
4 posted 2001-08-08 09:28 AM


I really love this...

~Tier

allis4angel
Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal
5 posted 2001-08-08 04:08 PM


Thank you all for your nice words breaking the silence.

[This message has been edited by allis4angel (edited 08-08-2001).]

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