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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Answers. I'm looking for some answers, Not your sympathy, Can you feel my cancer, They call it apathy, I'm slowy dying here, And I feel that you are gone, I see you disappear, I thought you were the one, I know that it's all my fault, And your not the one to blame, But you didn't bring me to halt, And I'm still spinning in this game, I think I need to know, Why you cheat on me, I feel me pain grow, But you will not set me free, Just wait and watch me burn, Burn me at the stake, I wait and watch you turn, So more from me you take, Cheating hearts, And undecided mind, I'm torn apart, No love is blind, I'm seeing more, But believing less, I'm feeling sore, But you do not guess, I feel the need to get revenge, To cleanse your soul, My love avenged, That is my goal, Your going to feel my pain, And this is going to hurt, It's not happening again, I'll trample you to dirt, Rectify the madness, Educate the confused, Fill my heart with sadness, And I'll tell how I'm abused. Err I didn't realise how long this was until I just read it. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this rocked!!! I thought that this was great!!! Nicely written here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Seems like you just took a pen and went nuts to a rhyme scheme!  I just ~LOVE~ doing that! Hope it helped. Oh, and the result is magnificent as well.  Very nice. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you did a good job writing this one thing though, Why even stoop down to her level? This won't make you any different from her... hope you think about that "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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