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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2001-03-04 08:07 PM

My heart no longer
Trapped within the towers of my imagination
With my words as my sword
And my strength of my shield
I'll be able to make it thru this cold and bitter world
Protected by the Paladin
Created within my soul
I'll once more feel pure and whole
Love and Life will no longer be and endless battle
Of Tears and Pain
Nor be haunted by Long Forgotten Names
Instead I'll look forward to seeing the sun rise again
I'll even cherish rain drops that fall upon my lips
And the touch of rose petals beneath my fingertips
I finally do believe that my soul is rippening
Ready and willing to drink in life's eternal bliss
And ready for my first pure kiss...

"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-04 09:13 PM

Outsanding! Truly magnificent!
I would ~SO~ love to collaborate with you sometime. We have to find a way! I don't care if I have to fly out there!

This piece is great. A coming of age, ripening of the soul... very excellent.
I'm running out of adjectives!
Splendid! Library piece!
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2001-03-04 09:47 PM

Wow. That was GREAT!! Why can't I ever write anything like that?!? I'm impressed....

Man!
Bel

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-04 09:57 PM

Such a wonderful poem.
I truly enjoyed this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-03-05 08:53 PM

Bravo!!! Ceinwyn
It's nice to see you again
Wonderful post
Bravo!!!

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-03-06 10:48 AM

i really liked this. its going in my libary. i havent seen you for a while....but i havent been here for awhile either. amazing work!
regina

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