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jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2001-02-28 10:19 PM

Where am I,
What is this place,
Was I put here for lack of love,
Or just because of my discrase,

Look around Am I all alone,
No where to go no place to call home,
Trying to come to grips with things to come,
I just wonder where every one is cause this is no fun,

I hear tears for me,
I look over there to see,
And I see my love crying her eyes out calling my name,
I call back just to hear a ecco all around just the same,

Where am I,
I see her look down and start crying again,
SO I look to see me in a coffen,
Dead to the world,
And just because of my love for my girl.

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-01 02:06 PM

Nicely done here, preatty sad though.
Hopefully all is well

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-03-01 05:30 PM

very innovative and very imaginative
i like it a lot
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-03-01 05:38 PM

This is pretty good. Nice job Jay.

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

4 posted 2001-03-01 06:04 PM

I was starting to worry because I didn't post for a week I have just been alittle stressed because of life right now

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

5 posted 2001-03-01 07:04 PM

sorry to hear
the poem was written from the heart which is really good

JR

When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

6 posted 2001-03-02 12:43 PM

thanks for caring jermey It is just part of life

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

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