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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I died when you took away your love I died when you broke my heart I died when you said goodbye I died when you took back you heart I die even more with each tear that falls. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is very sad... is it about Justin??  Hope not... good pome tho. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a sad piece, but it's well-written. I hope it doesn't apply to you, but if it does, I hope writing this brought some release. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This poem... made me think of someone that I know. But she wasn't talking about a person. Makes me wonder if you were... If this ~is~ about Justin, you can always talk to me, hon. Just IM me. And a great poem. Repitition is a good technique that I don't use enough. -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Did he move to his mom's place? that's the first thing i thought of when i read this poem be strong Tamma beautiful share So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Acctually, this isn't about Justin at all...THe words just kind of came to mind(like they always do). Justin and I are doing great...  If you heard about the helicopter crash in Hawaii, my brother was there, he wasn't in it, but he was there. He and I are really close, so when I hadn't heard from him, I automaticly thought the worst, so if he died, I died as well. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good to hear yer doing great....i kinda freaked out while reading it. nice one here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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