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Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

0 posted 2001-03-07 11:52 AM

Another quick one written for the sake of boredom.
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All my thoughts are jumbled up
Inside my head,
And to get them all out on paper
Seems like an endless task.
Only a few days ago,
I thought this would be easy.
I thought I might get through this
Without a scratch.
But this battle for normality,
Has turned into a deadly one.
And to turn back now would
Expose me to even deadlier habits.
This is too hard.
And I'm not strong.

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

[This message has been edited by Tears of Glass (edited 03-07-2001).]

DreadedLiver
Member

since 2001-01-23

Posts 56
Alter, Ego

1 posted 2001-03-07 12:38 PM

very clear
i like that in a poem..i can totally understand what youre going through... same with me a few years back... just walk to your own drum

JR

"The *bump for jeremydraul's work, hahaha!!"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-03-07 03:49 PM

You must be strong.....find something to lean on ......find somebody.......anything, but don't give up!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-03-07 07:05 PM

I can relate to a lot of what is being said in here, as well.
Great expressive piece.
Writing for the sake of boredom is fun. That is why some of my best is written in school.

See you around.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-03-12 09:33 AM

Tears, hang in there
Don't turn back, keep going
Who said it's gonna be easy anyways?
Secondly, Who said you aren't normal anyways?
On who's standard was that based?
keep strong

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-03-12 10:43 AM

Tears- Very good poem. I can understand how you are feeling, but try to stay strong. It seems hopeless and pointless sometimes, but if you keep telling yourself that you're not,then you never will be and you'll give up. Don't.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

6 posted 2001-03-12 02:53 PM

Hey Babe,

Yet another great one and keep fighting and stay strong and eat your vegetables. Okay sorry thats over heheh. Until your next poem love ya

-- Linc

Empty tears
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 64

7 posted 2001-03-12 07:50 PM

Sweetheart, that is so sad. im glad you found piptalk as a way to unload...i just found it today and think its an awesome way to express pain...but allways remember God is there too, even when you doubt that he cares.
Brittany(ARGS)

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

8 posted 2001-03-12 07:54 PM

Hey, be happy,that's all I can realy say.

and hi Empty Tears, I'm looking for a poem from you now.

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