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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-02-07 07:20 PM


~*~ Make Love to Me ~*~

Take my hand . . . kiss it,
Take my heart . . . don’t break it,
Make love to me.

Kiss my lips  . . . look in my eyes,
Feel my heartbeat . . . look into my soul,
Make love to me.

Talk to me . . . let me feel your love,
Touch my face . . . let me know its true.
Make love to me.

Hold me close . . . protect my soul,
Under God’s eye . . . we made a vow,
Make love to me.

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They're going to publish this one!!  


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I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me  



[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-07-2001).]

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Acies
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1 posted 2001-02-07 08:20 PM


let me say in behalf of everyone that we are proud of you and your poem being published

Yes, the talent is here in Passions  
what more can I say, congratulations Tamma

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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2 posted 2001-02-07 09:32 PM


Woo hoo!  CONGRATS TAMMA!!!
My first publication (Manequin) was so exciting for me, even though I didn't get squat for it!  ~_^
I love it!  Beautiful poem.  Redneck love is a beautiful thing.  
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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3 posted 2001-02-07 11:28 PM


WELL one of mine was supposed to be published! But my MOM accidentally threw away the papers i was supposed to sign and return!! UGGH~!

but anways good poem and congrats  

*dq


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jeremydraul
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4 posted 2001-02-08 12:30 PM


Hmm where the heck can I get published? email me at jeremydraul@hotmail.com if you have info. Congrats Tamma, I think Ive read this before... nice job anywho!

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

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5 posted 2001-02-08 11:06 PM


Congrats on being published........
Nice poem here......

I never looked to get published.....so none for me here.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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