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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-02-01 04:40 PM


I’ve gone from being “Just a girl”
To being “Just one of the guyz”?

I don’t let it bother me,
Cause either way,
I’ll always have a male friend,
To confide my secrets in.

I’m just curious how I went,
From “Just a girl” to “Just  one of the guyz”



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Angel Bee
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1 posted 2001-02-01 04:57 PM


I can see where you're coming from. When I was younger I was just one of the guys but now I've grown out of that. The time comes sooner than ya know it.
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2 posted 2001-02-01 06:55 PM


Well that's not really a bad thing.





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-02-01 07:02 PM


Heh... very nice.
Try being "just one of the girls" if you are a guy.  It's a lot more damaging for the self-esteem, believe me.
Lovely poem.
-Allan

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4 posted 2001-02-01 07:52 PM


lol @ Allan
i was thinking the same thing as allan too
well Tamma, that means they've accepted you
how, i don't know, but it means more priviledges for you i guess

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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5 posted 2001-02-05 05:36 PM


I thought about saying what allan did but decided not to, then read his reply and started to laugh   Good job on the poem

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6 posted 2001-02-05 05:48 PM


This is completely understandable! I've always been a little prissy... but I've had guys that I like think of me as Just a Buddy. I hated that. Oh well, that's life.
xoxo
Jenn


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7 posted 2001-02-05 05:50 PM


I'm there too! Eventho I sometimes resemble my "message icon" I like it actually.  Look at it this way, guys may rate you, but they don't judge you...usually....
Bel

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8 posted 2001-02-05 07:29 PM


Hehehe...It doesn't bother me @ all, until they start spreading rumors that I'm cheating on Justin with one of them....hmm...didn't I write a poem about that a few days ago????

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


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9 posted 2001-02-06 01:40 AM


Hmm, Allan your a freak. Tamma nice work as always. Its good to see some change in your life.

Jeremy


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katherine
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10 posted 2001-02-06 01:55 AM


hahaha Allan are you saying you tryed to be a girl? that so funny.
Good poem Tamma. it's pretty cool being one of the guys.

~kate~

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