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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-02-01 04:27 PM


Everyday it’s something new
They don’t like us together
I know we’re different
But why do they lie about me?
I didn’t cheat on you yesterday
I never have and I never will
What my lil brother said
Was a mistake, it’s not true
I don’t need a baby now
It hurt when you said
You didn’t know if
You still loved me
I told you to think about it
To look deep inside
To see if there was still love
For the girl standing in front of you
I still cried, cause it hurt
They all tried to help
But it wouldn’t work
I got home and looked
@ my Caller ID and saw your #
I hurried up, and called right back
You said you thought about it
All I could say was “And”
I cried when you said
“I love you”
All I could say back was
“Thank you”
I LOVE YOU TOO!!!
I fought to keep us together
I know you saw that
Never once, have I given up
On this, the best relationship I’ve been in

Justin, I loved you then,
I love you now,
I always have,
And I always will.

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~




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[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-02-2001).]

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Ina
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1 posted 2001-02-01 04:36 PM


wow!Tamma, Justin is the luckiest guy to have you and vice versa. Im so happy foor you to. the poem was just beautifully amazing.
Regina

when i wish for you, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined.

Tamma
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2 posted 2001-02-01 05:27 PM


Hehe...Thanks Regina...JHS is a rough school, when it comes to people gettin stuck in other's relationships...especially when it comes to a REDNECK'S relationship But things are getting better, since Justin's told them to "BUTT OUT!!"


hehehe


~*~ Tamma Loves Justin  ~*~


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3 posted 2001-02-01 05:51 PM


I thought this was a sweet poem. I knew the situation beforehand and could expect a poem about it. Nicely done.






I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-02-01 07:25 PM


I don't have any constructive criticizm right now
all i want to say is im glad you and justin worked things out

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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5 posted 2001-02-01 07:32 PM


Maybe it's just me but...
i think Tamma has a thing for this Justin guy.
Did anyone else get that impression?
^_^
Good poem, Tamma, as usual.
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

Tamma
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6 posted 2001-02-01 07:58 PM


BACKROUND INFORMATION:

Yesterday, Justin's cousin told him I walked out of the Cafeteria holding another guys hand, and there was rumor going around that I'm pregnant(which I'm certainly not).After everything that was said, he said he didnt kno if he still loved me. I told him he had to look deep inside to know if he still did...WHen I got home, I checked the Caller ID, and he'd called a few mins before, so I called him right back. He said he'd thought about it...and, as the poem states, I said "And?" then he said "I love you"..and all I could say back was "Thank you"

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~



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7 posted 2001-02-01 08:23 PM


Well hey there i want you to just know that im here for ya tamma and i will always be there to talk to you know my email so if your feeling down use it and this poem is great i really liked it. i hope everything works out and i would just like to say: I LOVE THE NEW LOOK AT PASSIONS!!!!


"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"



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8 posted 2001-02-02 01:21 AM


Tamma embarks upon wondrous feelings as we arrive in a new look of passions... Ahhh, the sweetness of life.

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Tamma
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9 posted 2001-02-02 06:25 PM


is there some sort of conspiracy against my happiness lately? this is getting old...i mean, if ya see this, check out "One Helluva Week", as well.


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katherine
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10 posted 2001-02-03 01:25 AM


Great poem!!!!

~katherine~

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11 posted 2001-02-03 11:36 AM


Wonderful poem Tamma!!!! I am so happy for you. "Amanda"

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


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