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Allysa
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0 posted 2001-01-30 08:32 AM


They all don't like who I am,
they don't like the way I dress,
they don't like the way I talk,
they don't like ME none the less.
But is doesn't matter now,
because I like me the way I am,
instead of the way they want me to be,
I am who I am.
They try to change my attitude,
they try to change my mind,
they try to perfect every person,
everything of human kind.
But they can't change me,
because I am something more.
I am the way I want to be,
I am forever more.
They try to hate me,
they try not to care,
but in the end,
the truth will always be there.
Because I will always be,
what ou taught me to be,
Myself,
and I thank you for that.

----------------------------------------------------
I think I've gone mad.

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-30 11:36 AM


Allysa~
We all think we've gone mad once in a while. If this poem is true, then stay strong. I know how hard it is but don't give in. Great work again.

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-01-30 12:54 PM


Impressive.  I loved it.
You've gone mad?  You are already handling it well by putting it into your poetry.
I recently realized the importance of the self in my own life, so I know exactly what you are saying here.
Great job.
-Allan

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3 posted 2001-01-30 01:23 PM


You haven't gone mad.......if anything you've realized the truth. The fact that as long as you are YOU........it's all good.
Keep posting!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
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4 posted 2001-01-30 04:21 PM


this was sooooooo powerful
who is "they", peers? friends?
nevertheless, being yourself is all that counts, individuality is the best way to live, screw what other people think
thanks for the read

-JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

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5 posted 2001-01-30 08:27 PM


allysa, you are so funny -- i mean your last comment
that is the only thing that has made me smile today
back to the poem
i have a quote and i'll give you a clue on what it is
you might know it already
go see 10 things i hate about you
remember what the aussie guy told the new guy outside during the party when the new guy wanted to quit
you might know it already, but if you don't
go rent it then
might as well make you work for it  
great poem

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Allysa
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6 posted 2001-02-01 03:34 PM


Thanks to everyone!!!!!!!! Especially Acire, ya know I love ya!!!!!!!!! Glad to make you laught or smile or whatever! Can't you just tell me the quote????

Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true.


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