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Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 325
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0 posted 2001-06-26 03:42 AM



In a world of dreams
reality is the only nightmare
nightly screams
daytime doesn't dare

Darkness looms
hatered blooms
the evil has no end
broken promises never to mend

In a land filled with screams
pain is always there
the pain doesn't hurt
as long as I continue to dream

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

© Copyright 2001 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
1 posted 2001-06-26 03:58 AM


hey this is kooly, i like (as usualy, i don't think there is a poem of yours i dislike cept for when u went all rap)  so ur willin to come online to post, but not to talk to me, eh? :-(  i see how it is...
-berg-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

Love's Addiction
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 57
all around you
2 posted 2001-06-26 03:16 PM


this was good also. nice job. thanks for the read.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 255

3 posted 2001-06-26 06:15 PM


i really liked this and i know how you feel(although it doesnt make anything better for you) this was an awesome poem im putting it in my library.

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
4 posted 2001-06-26 06:47 PM


This is dark...REALLY dark.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-06-27 02:13 AM


Nicely done here POA. I liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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6 posted 2001-06-27 06:20 PM


well done...i realte to this...hope to se more ...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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