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princess^sarah
Member

since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

0 posted 2001-06-24 11:22 PM

For every heart that finds love,
There is a heart that cries.
For every dream that is reborn,
There is a dream that dies.

For everyday filled with sun,
There is a day of rain.
For every hour filled with joy,
There is an hour of pain.

For every smile upon your face,
There is a tear to cry.
For every fond hello you say,
There is a sad goodbye!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-06-25 12:06 PM

Oh I like, I like! I really like your style, Sarah, very cool!
Rhonda

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

2 posted 2001-06-25 02:03 AM

I REALLY liked this one...it was very cool...what you said is so true...until next time....
~Nikki~

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2001-06-25 05:49 AM

hey this was pretty kool if i do say so myself...rather interesting. i liked the style of it, good work sarah.
-fear-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-06-25 03:13 PM

I love the last two lines. VERY, VERY true. Ah, memories.. *sigh*
Nice work, Sarah. Excellent flow, and rhyme scheme. I enjoyed this very much.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2001-06-25 03:29 PM

Well it's good to see some old work up here at the top, this was great Princess Sarah thanks for the great read.
Andrew

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-26 01:01 AM

This is overly good. I would have never expected this from you since you don't really write in this fashion. It was so wonderful.....I am amazed.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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