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the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-06-20 08:52 AM

NO need for a name
your not worthy to have that privilage
you'll kill us all the same
cause you lack a thing called courage

No need for a name
you thing your better than us all
to you this is just a game
where you're the one left standing tall

No need for a name
your actions speak louder than words ever did
you seek self and fame
you take us out to the auction then sell us for the lowest bid

No need for a name
you name your self every time you speak
I think it's such a shame
that you'll hurt others just to continue your winning streak

No need for a name
you'll forget us all the same
no need for a name
you're all about self fame

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-06-20 08:57 AM

Hey,

This is really good! I think it may be one of my favorites of yours it's going into my library. Your a wonderful poet I hope to have the honor to read more of your work. Until your next poem

-- Linc

       "Blood Moon"
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Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-20 12:05 PM

This one I really enjoyed. My favorite lines were:
"I think it's such a shame
that you'll hurt others just to continue your winning streak"

That speaks so much truth.. it is a shame that people will stoop so low sometimes. Nice work.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-06-20 01:30 PM

This is really cool...I think it could prolly be determined many different ways... keep 'em coming.

Jenn

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-06-20 06:55 PM

I liked this one...it was different but it was still excellent and what you said I applied to a few things in life...which is kinda sad...until next time....
~Nikki~

[This message has been edited by Shygirl82 (edited 06-20-2001).]

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