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DreadedLiver
Member

since 2001-01-23

Posts 56
Alter, Ego

0 posted 2001-01-28 05:30 PM

Im pissed off... read it in a pissed off mood. Thanks.

Pending Your Resolution:

The misery you beam comforts my felicity.
How do you cast both ray’s of debate?
Make me blithe, make me dolorous.
Don’t try to relieve me: it’s too late.

You must choose: selfishness or sharing.
Please don’t let me impress your decision.
Just neglect my being; as you’ve done before,
As your overdue words blur my vision.

Obvious excuses exasperate my weary ears.
Of no convenience do they manufacture.
Please don’t let me impress your life.
Your faces of concern still yield to stir.

I'm sickened by this relationship.
It makes me feel divided from you.
No longer do I need this: but I do.
I guess I only want it, only if it’s true.

-Knightfellow

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

1 posted 2001-01-28 05:38 PM

amazing!!..i followed your anger and aguish every verse of it and felt it within me...great job on presenting your true feelings in the poem..great work

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

2 posted 2001-01-28 10:19 PM

So... theres a girl in your life... who gives you happinesss and sorrow
sounds like what Im going through
i hope things start to come together for you..try not to give up

~JDR

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-01-28 10:25 PM

Very well expressed... i think it's the general feeling of anyone who can't figure out what the other person is feeling. Great work.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-28 11:35 PM

I read it all pissed off.....it was fun.
I liked it.......it pissed me off!
I like the ending though, it really hit me. Kind of sums of the whole poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-01-30 09:47 AM

There's 3 things i sensed in this poem at the start:

anger
hatered
hurt

In the end, your true self come out

"No longer do I need this: but I do.
I guess I only want it, only if it’s true."

a soft and loving heart......is what i saw on these lines

Beautiful read my friend. hope things get better

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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