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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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THE BEACH The love we have bursts on our private beach Every sunset sets the scene for two lovers along the oceans shores the air filled with the scent of sea water A girl walks upon the seas sandy paradise looking for her lover Where is he, she thinks blushing at her thoughts lowering her lashes to her cheeks a quick smile forms He walks proud and tall spotting her tanned body walking in the water he calls out to her she stops and smiles he runs to catch up to her He sees the blush staining her cheeks, smiles devilishy and kisses her Her thoughts scatter as his hands stroke her body Shedding the little clothing they have on He stands proud with his body She blushes fiercly They come together on the soft bed of sand they whisper their words of passion that soon turn into vows of love Regina |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ina--- For some reason, someone is really inspiring you to write such beautiful poetry. I love every word of it. ~*applauds*~ "alas, lips entwine as two are molded into one...." sorry, just wanted to add that  hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic [This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
this is beautifully written...such imagery! such romance! beautiful! - ethel |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wonderful...beautiful images and i loved this piece...the ending everything was great ...hope to see more...bye Ina  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Nicholas Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 20Washington , U.S |
Great job I really liked this one and the images were really good thanks for the great read. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is beautiful! careful with the steamy stuff ok |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Steamy? o that....Sorry Madam moderator |
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TheGreatMango Junior Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 17Louisana, USA |
o my sucha pleasnt piece of WORK my dear it is very very lovley and and well IT AHS A HAPPY Feeling somethingg pleasant and i dunno i like it |
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bigfuzzybear Junior Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 11 |
i LOVE it! Great use of visualization. It reminds me of a dream i once had about an angel. Brad |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I better have been that angel brad.....lol I hope u enjoyed it..hehe. i hope you all enjoyed it. with love forever Brad.*kiss* Regina xoxo |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
oooo regina. i like this muchs! great imagery here *sighs* soo romantic. heh seems u have a great thing goin with brad  hope he keeps u writin great pieces like this..not that u didnt already....hmm im gonna hesh up now *boggles* :p newayz! great job tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nicely done Regi! Wow this rocked. You are really writing some amazing poetry!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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