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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2001-06-05 09:54 AM


Howdy Howdy!  lol  I wrote this one just last night.  I was thinking about the person I kind of like, but until last nite didn't realize how much I really do like her...  I'd never give this to her, though, cause she would probably end up going with me just because she feels bad, and that would just suck.  Anyway, this is probably a situation that many of you have gone through, but this is how I feel.  Let me know what you think!  

CONSIDER THIS

What's up with this?
It can really hurt
I know you're newly single
But do you have to flirt?

I've liked you for a while
I always thought you knew
Apparently you didn't
But now I guess you do

You like to joke around
But I wish that it was more;
The way you got so close to me
I walked you to your door

You're single once again
But I bet I'll be overlooked
You've got guys in line for you
It seems you're overbooked

Every guy seems better
More attractive, more outgoing
I guess I don't look too great
And my shy side's often showing

I hope you will concider
Taking a chance with me
And I hope that you will think
Of all that we could be


      - Cody -

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 06-05-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-05 10:01 AM


Sometimes people can be so inconsiderate of other peoples feelings....dont let her hurt ya hun  
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2 posted 2001-06-05 02:09 PM


I REALLY think you should give this to her...she may not realize you like her that way.....maybe she wishes you did......I hope you give it to her.....every girl wants poetry written for her.....it's beyond romantic in my eyes..... take the chance....
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3 posted 2001-06-05 04:39 PM


yea...yous hould and this is a hard situation...hope everything works out for you ...bye cody

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4 posted 2001-06-05 10:23 PM


I don't think you should give this to her cuz it's not safe. Who knows what she'd say. Some people are scared off that way and she is newly single then getting with you would be her rebound. You don't wanna be a rebound.
As for the poem, it rocked. I really liked it. I have been through this....what did I do to get the girl? I gave her a poem *snickers*

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-05 11:01 PM


Wow. Hunny you really put your heart in this poem.  It brought tears to my eyes    I hope things work out for yah though

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.
Whatever tomorrow b

CwboyAtHeart
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6 posted 2001-06-05 11:43 PM


Hey Everybody!  Just thought I'd let you know that I did give it to her.  I don't think it did any good, but it totally feels good to let people know those things, ya know? Anyway, thank you all for posting.

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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